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Write to a graduate of your college

They studied where you do and now work somewhere you are curious about.

Not for this: You have never looked them up. Spend ten minutes first.

With scripts off, copy the text on the right and replace each {blank} yourself.

About you

e.g. Lakeside College

e.g. second-year student

e.g. Amara Okafor

e.g. 2028

About them

e.g. the county health department

e.g. Dr. Lin Zhou

e.g. the alumni directory

e.g. public health

e.g. how you decided between graduate school and working first

Your email

Subject: Fellow {my_school} student: a question about {their_org}

Dear {their_name},

I am a {my_year} at {my_school}, and I saw in {how_found} that you studied here before joining {their_org}. I am trying to work out whether {their_field} is right for me, and you are doing the thing I am curious about.

If you had twenty minutes for a call this month, I would be grateful for your view on {specific_question}. If now is a bad time, I understand.

With thanks,

{my_name}
{my_school}, class of {my_grad_year}

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Do

  • Say where you found them.
  • Ask one real question.

Do not

  • Open with flattery.
  • Ask for a job.

No reply? Wait about 7 days, then send one follow-up.